The Slow Flow

May 15, 2009

A Time to Paint chapter 1: The DEAL

Filed under: A Time to Paint: Story am writing — naveen gupta @ 7:48 am
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“So finally, how much you want?” asked the man with the golden watch around his left wrist “and by when?”
“250 crore excluding your commission” she said with the same strong expression in her eyes with which she has been killing her clients. “And of course as I told you before, by tomorrow evening”
“I am sorry madam but I still think you are asking for too much and that too in such a short time, its impossible.”
“Both of us know what I am asking for is much less than the value. And as far as time is concerned, that is why you are here, Chand Babu. Isn’t it your task to make it possible? That is why you are being paid.”
 “But…”
“So it is final now” she said in a strong voice with authority, standing up from the low stool she had been sitting on. This was when Chand noticed her face on which now fell the light of the moon outside, coming through a window placed high in the opposite wall ( brothels, usually don’t have low windows)
“But………still…..only one day………….Two hundred cro………not a small sum…..”
“Yes one day……and be grateful for that Chand babu. Now I think you must get to work Chand babu, you have a big deal to crack.” And she left without another word.
“Hmhhhh… considers herself smart” he said in an undertone.
Well 250 crore is not a problem the problem is, why is she selling all and why she is in such a hurry? Anyways 250 for a property of 1200 is not a bad deal
“So finally, how much you want?” asked the man with the golden watch around his left wrist “and by when?”
“250 crore excluding your commission” she said with the same strong expression in her eyes with which she has been killing her clients. “And of course as I told you before, by tomorrow evening”
“I am sorry madam but I still think you are asking for too much and that too in such a short time, its impossible.”
“Both of us know what I am asking for is much less than the value. And as far as time is concerned, that is why you are here, Chand Babu. Isn’t it your task to make it possible? That is why you are being paid.”
 “But…”
“So it is final now” she said in a strong voice with authority, standing up from the low stool she had been sitting on. This was when Chand noticed her face on which now fell the light of the moon outside, coming through a window placed high in the opposite wall ( brothels, usually don’t have low windows)
“But………still…..only one day………….Two hundred cro………not a small sum…..”
“Yes one day……and be grateful for that Chand babu. Now I think you must get to work Chand babu, you have a big deal to crack.” And she left without another word.
“Hmhhhh… considers herself smart” he said in an undertone.
Well 250 crore is not a problem the problem is, why is she selling all and why she is in such a hurry? Anyways 250 for a property of 1200 is not a bad deal

2 Comments »

  1. hey…nice n creative. Well, Waiting for chapter2. Keep writing…All the good wishes.

    Comment by Elon — May 17, 2009 @ 2:15 pm | Reply

  2. u shud complete it nw….. il help as i promisd 😛

    Comment by surbhit — May 19, 2009 @ 12:07 pm | Reply


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